Just added my first blog entry before reading that you don't publish first person. Could you look at the piece and tell me if it's worth changing to Second and Third Person? It's titled: 9 Things I Learned at the International Dream Conference. 9 Things You Can Learn from the Dream Experts might be a more appropriate title? But I'm not sure how I'd change the rest other than to write a less whimsical, more fact-based article...
I don't profess to be an expert, but I like reading about lucid dreaming.
In my humble opinion, I would change it to third person and make it a more fact-based article, more concise so to speak.
For a title, I would suggest simplicity, such as Tips for Lucid Dreaming or something of that sort.
Just my 2 cents... :) ...Thank you for the opportunity to be of service.
Also, if you post the link here it would be easier for the editors versus having to track it down. ;-) That's one of my weak areas as well. But we do have a great editorial staff, so I am sure you'll get all the help you need!
Meaning, post the link to the whole article? Good idea. I'm new to the site so assume I just go back to my page and find it...?
Will do... I will go there and look now.