I am finishing an article about a first hand experience and alternative methods used to care for someone else.  I am using the my own voice. It also shifts voice in some spots.

Can I do this?  I see you do not like articles in first voice but if it is an actual experience and the methods use is that alright?

Thanks for your feed back.

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Robin, while your article may include actual experiences, they ought to be presented in a way that is exemplary. Just as we would not use actual names even though they are actual/real experiences. In this way we focus more on the subject and message rather than the first-person/"my" interpretation.

If you like, please send a draft of your article and we can work on revising it as necessary to provide for an expository presentation of the experience. Thank you for reaching out! ~ Blessings! 

Kathy,  this story is about the alternative treatments I used on my Great Aunt.  I moved her from a nursing home into my house. She was a full blown Alzheimer's patient. the expereince was incredible. I wanted folks to know the methods I used to keep her healthy.  Yes, a person with Alzheimer's can be healthy.

Difficult moving from talking about her and why I did what I did to a different voice.


Kathy Custren said:

Robin, while your article may include actual experiences, they ought to be presented in a way that is exemplary. Just as we would not use actual names even though they are actual/real experiences. In this way we focus more on the subject and message rather than the first-person/"my" interpretation.

If you like, please send a draft of your article and we can work on revising it as necessary to provide for an expository presentation of the experience. Thank you for reaching out! ~ Blessings! 

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