"Very nice - and I can appreciate the stylistic things you are putting in here, Jenilee. The biggest part is to watch for consistency through your piece. If you have had a chance to review those "five quick steps to writing a great…"
"How and Why- do we chose to forget all of the good things we experience for the exchange of the wrong that has been done to our lives?! In my own experience of a separation I can look at it and say, "Oh I wish I never married! I wasted 5 years…"
"Lost Nothing and Gained Everything (Second Draft written 6/11/2013)
The way I see it, is that I am not glad because it ended, I'm just glad I got an opportunity to experience at least a fraction of it. People become devastated after a break up…"
I regret nothing, because those moments created an opportunity for me to share and relate to more people who experience the same in life. There is only pain if we allow it. Ego suffers and self-punishes but “Spirit” nourishes and…"
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I HAVE LOST NOTHING AND GAINED EVERYTHING!
Written by Jenilee Tirado
The way I see it, is that I am not glad because it ended, I'm just glad I got an opportunity to…"
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"Hi Jenilee - we will be helping you with this shortly today. Articles should be in the third person, but if you need open up in the 1st person for a reason, then weave it fairly quickly into the third person so that the essence and message of the…"
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A free-spirit, motivational artist with a love for all and a mission to find beauty in everything.Serving her life purpose as a Photographer and Kundalini Yoga Instructor, allows her to balance her life. Jenilee (BeYOU2FullSpirit), is a strong research advocate for healthy living lifestyle, specifically helping women and children overcome trauma, sharing her knowledge and volunteering her time. She also enjoys spoken word poetry, social media networking, and creating healthy recipes. She has the ability to express her views from a heartfelt standpoint and portray the "extra" beauty discovered in what others may find "ordinary".
Are there additional websites where you can be found?
I have a motivational page called BeYou2FullSpirit on facebook, where i re post positive posts and write quotes or daily notes.
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